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10:00:00:00

Wide of burning Aleppo buildings as seen through crack in wall

TEXT: Aleppo, Syria

Music, Actuality

10:00:09:12

Wide of fighter about to cross junction

Fighter actuality TEXT:

“Stay back, stay back”

10:00:17:21

Wide of fighter about to cross junction

Fighter actuality TEXT:

“I don’t need covering fire”

10:00:22:06

Wide of fighter running across alley

Actuality

10:00:26:00

Mid shot of ABU MUHAMMED walked towards alley, reaction to tank blast

Actuality

10:00:33:12

Mid of destroyed buildings

Actuality

10:00:35:19

Wide of ABU MUHAMMED, fighter and reporter reacting to tank blast in distance

Actuality

10:00:42:15

Wide of fighter and reporter running towards camera

Fighter actuality TEXT:

“It’s coming, it’s coming”

10:00:48:18

CU camera wild as reporter gets into car

Reporter actuality TEXT:

“Tank’s coming”

10:00:53:19

Wide of Aleppo, smoke rising amid several bomb blasts

Title TEXT:

Battle for Syria

10:01:08:18

Montage of various wides of street to street fighting in Aleppo (shot by FSA fighters)

Actuality

10:01:19:07

Mid of ABU MUHAMMED getting out of car

Actuality

10:01:22:24

Mid of ABU MUHAMMED getting out of car

NARR:

Since defecting from the Syrian Army early in 2012, former colonel Abu Muhammed has been trying to organise rebel forces.

 

10:01:27:16

Mid of ABU MUHAMMED talking to fighters in the street

 

10:01:33:15

Mid of 3 fighters preparing for battle 

Fighters TEXT:

“God is great”

10:01:35:24

Wide of fighters waiting for battle

Fighters:

“Takbir! Allah-u-Akbar!”

10:01:38:01

Wide of fighters waiting for battle

NARR:

His new comrades aren’t used to taking orders.

10:01:41:03

Wide of ABU MUHAMMED walking down the street

Actuality:

ABU MUAHMMED TEXT: “Why is there always this hatred between us”

Fighter actuality TEXT:

“I’m defending my land. I’m the one who faces the tanks. Do you really expect me to go out like this”

ABU MUAHMMED TEXT:

“Put your ammunition back”

10:01:55:14

ABU MUHAMMED and fighter react to tank blast

Actuality

Fighters:

“Allah-u-Akbar”

10:01:59:11

Mid of fighters sitting and firing from behind barricade

Actuality

10:02:09:23

Mid of fighters sitting and firing from behind barricade

ABU MUHAMMED INTW TEXT:

“Most of the revolutionaries are civilians”

10:02:13:02

ABU MUHAMMED INTW

TEXT

“In the army there are rules

If you order a solder to do something and he fails…

… you can discipline him, but you can’t do that here

We have no discipline

10:02:26:01

Mid of fighters milling around, holding guns

ABU MUHAMMED INTV TEXT

“This is one of our biggest problems

They don’t follow directions

10:02:31:04

Wide of fighters walking up the street

ABU MUHAMMED INTW TEXT

“We make plans and they don’t abide by them

If they follow 15% of the plan, that’s a great result!”

10:02:39:15

ABU MUHAMMED INTW, mobile phone rings

ABU MUHAMMED ACTUALITY on phone TEXT:

“Yes, Abu Hussein,

I’m at my location

What can I do?

I only have 6 rockets and about 600 bullets

600 bullets”

10:03:00:12

Mid of fighters sitting against a wall

NARR:

It’s Abu Mohammed’s responsibility to distribute ammunition

10:03:05:08

Mid of fighters standing, holding RPGs

NARR:

and the rebels fighting the Syrian Army on the frontline are running short.

10:03:07:19

Mid of 2 fighters, one on radio

Actuality

10:03:11:12

ABU MUHAMMED sitting in garage, pan to mid of Mahmud

Actuality TEXT:

ABU MUHAMMED:

“Mahmud

Can you go to the car…

…and open the boot and take 3 bags

Each bag has 100 bullets

Take them to the hospital road”

10:03:23:03

Mid of soldiers standing up and walking out building

NARR:

Salahuddin district in Aleppo

10:03:27:21

Wide of fighters in back of pick up truck

NARR:

has seen the bloodiest fighting since the civil war began.

10:03:32:10

Wide of fighters in back of pick up truck

ABU MUHAMMED INTW TEXT

“The army has taken key areas of Salahuddin

10:03:35:21

ABU MUHAMMED INTW

TEXT:

“They push tanks forward…

…plant snipers and pull the tanks back

The snipers clear the area in front

The next day, the tanks advance past the snipers…

…and then the snipers go forward again”

10:03:51:01

Wide of dump truck filled with stones turns

 

10:03:52:14

Wide of dump truck driving by, stones fall off

NARR:

The rebels use anything available to build barriers in a war where the frontline is

10:03:37:16

Wide of fighters hunched behind wall made of stones

NAR:

constantly changing.

10:03:59:13

Mid ABU MUHAMMED and fighters discuss tactics near the street

Actuality:

ABU MUHAMMED TEXT:

“The army is moving back and forth.”

Fighter TEXT:

“We need local fighters, about 50 men”

10:04:08:12

Wide of fighters with guns alongside truck

Actuality

10:04:10:11

Wide of civilians running inside from the street

NARR:

Government soldiers have taken an important building

10:04:14:14

Wide of reporter and civilian running across a boulevard, camera follows

NARR:

in a nearby residential area.

10:04:23:13

CU of fighter preparing shells

NARR:

The rebels need to win it back, quickly.

10:04:27:14

Wide of fighters on top of AA gun on pickup truck

Actuality

10:04:40:16

CU fighters loading shells for AA gun

Actuality

10:04:43:00

Mid fighter adjusting AA gun on truck

Actuality

10:04:45:21

Wide of fighter driving AA gun into street and firing

Actuality

 

10:05:01:01

Wide of fighters holding guns on pavements

Actuality

10:05:01:12

Wide of more fighters with guns waiting by garage

NARR:

They claim to have killed 5 enemy soldiers while the others fled.

10:05:10:21

Low CU fighter POV from bed of retreating truck

NARR:

But this can’t be confirmed.

10:05:13:15

CU of fighter smoking on bed of retreating truck

Actuality

10:05:17:05

CU of fighter smoking on bed of retreating truck

NARR:

When they return to base, some of their own men are missing.

10:05:19:18

Mid of fighters milling about in front of open door

Actuality TEXT:

Fighter:

“We looked everywhere and couldn’t find them”

Fighter 2:

“Maybe they went the other way”

10:05:31:05

Wide of fighters cheering as car pulls up

NARR:

The missing men reappear with a defector who has left the Syrian army to join the rebels.

10:05:39:02

Mid of fighters cheering, milling around

Actuality TEXT

Fighter:

“He has just defected”

10:05:40:23

CU of DEFECTOR being congratulated by fighters, lifted onto shoulders

Actuality TEXT

Fighter:

“This soldier has just defected from Assad’s dogs”

10:05:49:00

CU of DEFECTOR on fighter’s shoulders, pull to wide of celebration, shots fired into air

NARR:

The government of Bashar al-Assad is mainly from the minority Alawites. But most of the population is made up of Sunni Muslims who’ve suffered under Assad’s repressive regime.

10:06:03:02

DEFECTOR INTW

DEFECTOR TEXT:

“I left the regular Syrian Army…

…because I didn’t want to kill my own people

The Sunnis”

10:06:10:14

Wide top shot of Aleppo

Music

10:06:12:21

Wide top shot of Aleppo

NARR:

With two-and-a-half million people,

10:06:14:19

Wide top shot of cars driving in Aleppo

NARR:

Aleppo is Syria’s largest city.

10:06:16:24

Wide of Aleppo

NARR:

It’s the country’s commercial centre

10:06:19:13

Wide of Aleppo

NARR:

and its citadel is one of the oldest structures in the world

10:06:25:14

Mid of ABU BAKRI and fighter walking up stairs

Music

10:06:28:06

Mid of ABU BAKRI and fighter walking up stairs

NARR:

In one of its suburbs, a group of fighters are taking a

10:06:31:08

CU tilt up of rifle

NARR:

couple of days before returning to battle.

10:06:35:14

Various Mids and CUs of fighters at rest

Music

Fighters:

“Allah-u-Akbar!”

10:06:41:04

Mid of ABU BAKRI talking with other fighters

NARR:

Their young commander, Abu Bakri, was chosen to lead having shown immense bravery on the battlefield.

10:06:48:14

CU of ABU BAKRI talking with other fighters

ABU BAKRI INTW TEXT:

“I finished compulsory military service in 2006”

10:06:51:23

ABU BAKRI INTW

ABU BAKRI INTW TEXT:

“Then I went back to my studies

And by Allah’s grace went on to study economics at the University of Aleppo

That was me, until the revolution started”

10:07:08:04

Top shot mid of fighters milling around

Actuality:

“Takbir! Allah-u-Akbar”

10:07:10:14

Top shot mid of fighters milling around

NARR:

At first, Abu Bakri had joined

10:07:12:15

Mid of ABU BAKRI talking to fighter and reporter

NARR:

peaceful demonstrations. But everything changed when he was

10:07:16:07

Mid of fighter hiding face with baseball cap

NARR:

arrested and tortured.

10:07:18:19

ABU BAKRI INTW

ABU BAKRI TEXT

“The way they beat people, it became clear that…

…they had no conscience about their actions”

 

10:07:24:23

Mid of fighter wrapped in ammo holding gun

NARR:

After his release, he joined the rebels

10:07:29:19

Mid of fighter’s rifle

ABU BAKRI INTW TEXT:

“We organised groups”

10:07:32:02

ABU BAKRI INTW

ABU BAKRI TEXT:

“And together we began to liberate the city”

10:07:36:24

Fighter Footage

Wide of Fighter firing shots off apartment balcony

Actuality, Music

10:07:38:00

Fighter Footage

Wide of Fighter firing shots off apartment balcony

NARR:

One of his men filmed this footage as the rebels advanced

10:07:41:06

Figher Footage

Mid profile shot of fighter firing off balcony

NARR:

through the streets of Salahuddin.

10:07:44:03

Fighter Footage

Mid of fighters shooting around corner of building

Actuality, Music

10:07:47:06

Fighter Footage

Mid of ABU BAKRI loading AA gun on truck

NARR:

But government forces have pushed back in recent days and the rebels were forced to retreat to prepare a counterattack.

10:07:56:06

Mid top shop of ABU BAKRI and fighters standing around talking

NARR:

As they wait, the fighters receive an SMS message

10:08:00:04

CU of SMS message in Arabic on mobile phone

NARR:

on their mobile phones.

10:08:02:18

Mid of fighter approaching ABU BAKRI with other fighters to show him SMS message

NARR:

It’s from the government.

10:08:06:03

Mid of fighter approaching ABU BAKRI with other fighters to show him SMS message

ACTUALITY TEXT

Reporter:

“Abu Bakri, there’s a message here

The Syrian Army advises the rebels…

…to get out of Salahuddin. What do you think?

ABU BAKRI:

“What?”

Reporter:

“’Learn from Salahuddin and put down your weapons’”

[Fighters jeer and laugh]

ABU BAKRI:

“That’s a new one”

Fighter:

“Tell them we’re coming back to Salahuddin”

Reporter:

“So what do you think?”

ABU BAKRI:

“It’s just propaganda

When we were in Salahuddin, they said we weren’t in Salahuddin”

Reporter:

“Do you pay any attention to it?”

ABU BAKRI:

“Not at all”

10:08:36:23

CU of SMS message on phone

Fighter Actuality TEXT

“When we see this we laugh”

 

10:08:40:03

Mid of ABU BAKRI, Fighter, Reporter reading SMS message

ABU BAKRI Actuality TEXT:

“’Look out Aleppo, the Syrian Army is coming’”

“And also”

“’Protect Aleppo by informing on the terrorists’”

“So we’re terrorists” (laughs)

10:08:52:05

Low CU of car tires spinning as they drive

Music

10:08:45:06

Low CU of car tires spinning as they drive

NARR:

In Salahuddin,

 

10:08:55:10

Mid of ABU MUHAMMED in road talking on radio

NARR:

things are not going well for Abu Mohammed and his men.

10:08:59:02

Wide of fighter running down the street holding gun

Music

10:09:02:21

CU of fighters crouched on frontline behind sandbags with gun

NARR:

They’re almost out of ammunition.

 

 

10:09:06:09

Mid of fighter on AA gun truck looking to the sky

Music

10:09:08:10

Mid of fighter on AA gun truck looking to the sky

NARR:

But their biggest problems are

10:09:09:22

Wide of aircraft in sky

NARR:

attacks from the air

10:09:12:02

Wide of two corpses in road

NARR:

and snipers

10:09:18:22

Mid of ABU SOMER in street

ABU SOMER Actuality TEXT:

“They set up at the end of the park on top the buildings

Look over there

On the mosque minaret and on the tall buildings

10:09:32:18

Mid of corpses in road

ABU SOMER Actuality TEXT:

“They formed a line of snipers

10:09:36:02

Mid of ABU SOMER in street

ABU SOMER Actuality TEXT:

“And targeted everybody, young, old and women

10:09:43:08

CU of corpse’s arm

Music

10:09:47:05

Mid of male corpse in front seat of yellow car

Music

10:09:49:02

CU of male corpse in front seat of yellow car

NARR:

A man throws his arms around his wife in a last desperate attempt to save her.

10:09:58:04

CU of boy’s corpse in back seat

NARR:

Their young son lies in the back.

10:10:02:01

Mid of back of car with broken windscreen

NARR:

The rebels thought they had killed all the snipers.

10:10:06:14

CU low shot

NARR:

But a shot narrowly missed our team,

10:10:08:15

Wide of ABU SOMER and fighters against stone wall

NARR:

forcing them to take cover.

10:10:14:02

 Wide of ABU SOMER looking for sniper, camera lowers and crawls along wall, runs across

Music

10:10:28:12

Wide of ABU SOMER and fighters against

NARR:

They can’t find the last sniper and the rebels must prevent civilians from wandering into the line of fire.

10:10:43:03

Mid of rebel fighter talking to Father with two young daughters

NARR:

This father and his daughters were stopped just in time.

10:10:48:20

Mid of Father and two daughters in street

Father and fighter Actuality TEXT

Father:

“Can I come back tomorrow?”

Fighter:

“God willing”

Fighter:

“The situation changes every half hour

You can’t come this way for the sake of you and your children”

Father:

“Are you telling me they will get killed?”

Fighter:

“Don’t be scared”

10:11:04:15

Wide of Father and two girls walking away down the street

Actuality, Music

 

10:11:11:05

Wide of Aleppo with rubble in foreground, burning buildings in the background

NARR:

Already, a quarter of a million people have fled Aleppo.

10:11:15:05

Black

NARR:

But many others remain, despite attacks from government jets,

10:11:19:05

Wide of back of family laden with bags walking away

NARR:

Helicopter gun ships and tanks

10:11:11:24

Wide of back of family laden with bags walking away

NARR:

Some blame the rebels for the destruction.

10:11:23:20

Wide of fighters running across the street

NARR:

Because everywhere the rebels go, Assad’s forces attack.

10:11:29:02

Wide of OLD MAN and 2 young boys at road side, pan to mid of fighter and reporter walking down the road from the back

OLD MAN Actuality TEXT:

OLD MAN:

“Why are you destroying the world?”

Fighter:

“We started with one bullet

We have God on our side

OLD MAN:

“But civilians are victims. We are being bombarded”

Fighter:

“The people of Homs put up with it for 18 months”

10:11:46:01

Wide from below of three boys hanging out of window ledge

NARR:

The father of these young boys tells us he can’t leave.

10:11:51:15

FATHER TWO CU up to neck

NARR:

Fearing the regime, he asks us not to show his face.

10:11:56:11

FATHER TWO INTW

FATHER TWO INTW TEXT:

“It’s not a question of danger

10:11:59:08

Wide of street

FATHER TWO INTW TEXT:

“I worked hard all my life to buy this house”

10:12:02:08

Wide of balconies from below

FATHER TWO INTW TEXT:

“Better for me to die here”

10:12:05:02

FATHER TWO CU up to neck

FATHER TWO INTW TEXT:

“We try our best to keep them inside”

10:12:09:17

Wide of 3 boys on windowsill

FATHER TWO INTW TEXT:

“We’re in God’s hands

It’s His will if we live or die”

10:12:16:17

CU of young woman in beige scarf and sunglasses

NARR:

A young woman with only a First Aid certificate has to tend the wounded.

10:12:21:21

YOUNG WOMAN INTW

YOUNG WOMAN INTW:

 “They are babies,

10:12:23:10

CU of baby on table getting stitches in face

YOUNG WOMAN INTW:

they are little kids, two years, two years. Three years, four years.

10:12:30:23

Mid of little boy on hospital bed covered in blood

YOUNG WOMAN INTW:

“They are wounded. Injured. In their – in their homes”

10:12:35:24

Wide of man carrying belongings across the street

NARR:

Anyone who can, is getting out.

10:12:40:22

Wide of car loaded with belongings

Actuality

10:12:43:07

Wide of van loaded with mattresses driving down the street

Actuality TEXT:

Fighter at checkpoint: “What’s happening?”

 

10:12:46:04

CU of family crowded into van

Actuality TEXT:

Van Driver:

“They’re bombing everyone. We’re scared for the kids”

 

10:12:49:11

CU of Van driving away into the distance

Actuality

10:12:57:21

INTW with Man in sunglasses standing in the street

Sunglasses Man INTW TEXT:

“Most people have left, only the poor remain”

10:13:02:12

Wide of Family of five walking down the street

Sunglasses Man INTW TEXT:

“Those without means can’t escape”

10:13:06:03

Sunglasses Man INTW

Sunglasses Man INTW TEXT:

“If you go out, you risk being killed by a sniper’s bullet or a bomb”

10:13:11:15

Wide of pram in road

Sunglasses Man INTW TEXT:

“If you go out, you risk being killed by a sniper’s bullet or a bomb”

10:13:17:00

Wide of sunset over Aleppo

NARR:

Day and night, the bombing is relentless.

10:13:23:14

CU of man running through doorway at night

Actuality TEXT:

“Everyone get off the streets, everyone go home”

10:13:30:06

Wide of men running in the streets at night after bombing

Actuality TEXT:

“Go inside”

“Get off the streets”

10:13:35:00

Mid of line of damaged cars

Actuality

10:13:37:20

Mid of man bent down hosing under car

Actuality

10:13:41:18

Mid of bloodied feet of corpse in truck bed,

Actuality, Music

10:13:45:16

CU of man looking at corpse in truck

Actuality, Music

10:13:49:20

Mid of three men walking and looking upset

Actuality, Music

10:13:51:24

 Wide of men standing in front of truck

NARR:

In a nearby apartment, exhausted rebel fighters

10:13:56:01

Mid of men lowering sheet over body

NARR:

Sing of love and sacrifice

10:14:00:00

Mid of men lowering sheet over body

Actuality singing TEXT:

“Mother, death has come to me

10:04:05:24

CU bloodied hand under sheet on truck bed

Actuality singing TEXT:

“Let your heart forgive me”

10:14:08:20

Mid of three fighters sitting on floor singing

Actuality singing TEXT:

“Don’t cry for me, mother

10:14:16:09

CU fighter singing

Actuality singing TEXT:

“Because I’m going to heaven”

10:14:21:13

Mid of three fighters sitting on floor singing

Actuality singing TEXT:

“Don’t cry for me mother

Because I’m going to heaven

Let my blood touch the sand”

10:14:34:00

Fade to mid of three men lifting corpse on chair into bed of truck in the daytime

Singing

10:14:39:04

Mid of corpse in truck bed

Singing

NARR:

A new morning, a new death

10:14:41:23

Wide of makeshift graveyard with tombstones

NARR:

As the toll mounts, public gardens have been converted into

10:14:48:16

Wide of upturned earth in green space

NARR:

makeshift graveyards to stem the threat of disease

10:14:51:14

Mid of men lifting headless corpse in camouflage into makeshift grave area

NARR:

from rotting bodies.

10:14:55:14

Wide of buildings taking fire from Syrian army

Actuality

10:14:59:04

Wide of fighting

Actuality

10:15:03:09

Wide of fighting, zoom in on ABU MUHAMMED exiting car

NARR:

Fighting has broken out near Abu Muhammed’s headquarters on the edge of Salahuddin.

10:15:08:22

Wide of fighters in sandpit holding guns

Actuality

10:15:13:02

Wide of fighters and ABU MUHAMMED following fighting

NARR:

Syrian Army heavy machine guns are trying to clear a path for its soldiers to advance towards the rebel position

10:15:24:06

Mid of ABU MUHAMMED walking towards fighters

ABU MUHAMMED Actuality TEXT

“Is the 14.5 ready?”

Fighter:

“Yes, it’s ready”

10:15:28:06

CU of fighter preparing AA shells, tilt up to his face

Fighter Actuality TEXT

“Only fire if you see the target

Make Amin come back and help”

10:15:36:10

CU of shells being prepared on ground

Actuality, Music

10:15:39:07

CU of Fighter feeding shells into AA gun

Actuality, Music

10:15:41:10

Mid of fighter adjusting AA gun

Music

 

10:15:43:14

Wide of white pick up truck mounted with AA gun rolling, Fighter firing gun

NARR:

As his men hold the government forces back, Abu Mohammed has dispatched a small group

 

10:15:52:10

Wide of fighter in red scarf holding gun

NARR:

to sneak around them

10:15:55:14

CU from behind of ABU MUHAMMED driving car

NARR:

But now they’ve run out of ammunition.

10:15:59:10

CU from rear Fighter in car and ABU MUAHMMED speaking to man in the street for directions

Fighter Actuality TEXT:

“The guys told said go through the side streets”

Man:

“Yes, they are in the side streets”

Fighter:

“So there’s definitely a way”

ABU MUHAMMED

“So where are they now?”

Man:

“You’ll see them at the 2nd junction”

10:16:09:09

Wide of street as car drives through POV passenger

NARR:

They have to speed  across junctions, where government snipers

 

10:16:41:15

CU of ABU MUHAMMED in car, driving

NARR:

have taken up positions.

 

10:16:16:20

Wide of car driving through street POV passenger

Actuality

10:16:18:16

Mid of ABU MUHAMMED talking to fighters

NARR:

The men waiting for him aren’t happy, but he’s giving them everything he can spare.

10:16:25:06

CU of ABU MUHAMMED reaching into ammunition supply box

ABU MUHAMMED Actuality TEXT:

“Come, come come

Stop arguing.

Look, I don’t have any bullet cases

This is two

This is three”

10:16:38:10

CU of ABU MUHAMMED writing in log book

NARR:

They have to account for every round.

10:16:44:05

Mid of ABU MUHAMMED getting RPG out of car trunk

Actuality

10:16:47:09

ABU MUHAMMED hands two RPGs to fighter

Fighter (off-camera) Actuality TEXT:

“Tell him to shout, ‘God is great’”

10:16:49:20

CU of ABU MUHAMMED handing fighter two launchers

NARR:

But their greatest problem is that this is a civilian army with little training

10:16:55:08

Mid of Fighter with RPG, ABU MUHAMMED and Fighter 2

Actuality TEXT

Fighter 2:

“He doesn’t have good marksmen”

10:16:57:17

Wide of street as Fighter with RPGs runs away

Actuality Fighter 2 TEXT:

“Go go go!

Run!”

10:17:04:16

CU of ABU    MUAHMMED drinking water from a plastic bottle

Actuality TEXT:

Off-camera:

“What’s happening? Has the situation eased?”

ABU MUHAMMED:

“The military withdrew

They tried to advance near al-Sai’d Bilaal mosque

But the guys stopped them”

10:17:2319

Mid of fighters sitting against wall

NARR:

As they rest for a moment,

10:17:27:05

Mid of ABU MUHAMMED and fighters talking

NARR:

they receive a radio message.

10:17:28:14

Mid of ABU MUHAMMED and fighters talking

Actuality TEXT

Radio:

“There is a tank by Salahuddin roundabout

We need munitions and snipers. Quickly”

ABU MUHAMMED:

“Get ready guys

Where’s the shooter?”

Fighter with radio:

“Go, go Nimeer”

Fighter with radio:

“Is that Abu Bakri?”

ABU MUHAMMED (to camera)

“There’s a tank near Salahuddin roundabout”

10:17:50:03

Wide of Aleppo with smoke rising

NARR:

Abu Bakri and his men have

10:17:54:06

Wide of ABU BAKRI and fighters at truck preparing

NARR:

Returned to action. They carry

10:18:00:00

CU of arms going into bag

NARR:

rocket-propelled grenades as usual, but today

10:18:02:01

Mid of ABU BAKRI talking with three fighters

NARR:

they have something more powerful

10:18:06:13

Mid of ABU BAKRI talking with three fighters

Actuality TEXT:

ABU BAKRI:

“I need electric tape”

10:18:10:18

Mid of ABU BAKRI entering side of transport van

Actuality TEXT:

ABU BAKRI:

“This is a bomb to destroy a tank

It’s hollow…

…and blows out here

We plant it in the road

If we don’t have anything else we use these

We make them ourselves, big and small

It all depends on the target”

10:18:37:12

CU of IED for a tank

Actuality, Music

10:18:40:23

Mid of fighters preparing guns in truck bed

Actuality, Music

10:18:44:21

Wide of Aleppo as seen from inside car

NARR:

They head for Salahuddin roundabout

10:18:51:06

Wide of truck with fighters turning the corner

NARR:

They’re approaching the very edge of the frontline.

10:18:56:14

Mid of ABU BAKRI talking to fighter near cars

Actuality, Music

10:18:59:06

Wide of fighter patrolling amid rubble

Actuality TEXT:

Fighter (off camera)

“There are soldiers over there”

10:19:03:14

Mid of ABU BAKRI and fighters

Actuality TEXT:

ABU BAKRI:

“Call one of our snipers

Who has a sniper rifle? There are 3 soldiers there”

10:19:13:09

Wide of ABU BAKRI pointing in direction of 3 soldiers

NARR:

The rebels often exaggerate their successes and play down their failures. Abu Bakri demands the truth.

10:19:21:18

Wide of fighters standing

Actuality TEXT:

Fighter (off camera)

“We’re lying to ourselves about Salahuddin”

10:19:25:15

Mid of ABU BAKRI and fighters talking

Actuality TEXT

Fighter:

“There only one road between us and them”

Fighter 2:

“What’s the real situation in Salahuddin?”

Fighter 3:

“Almost 90% is controlled by the regular Army”

ABU BAKRI:

“We’ve advanced to15th street

The army stormed in…

…but it doesn’t have the manpower to hold it”

10:19:41:02

Wide from behind of fighters walking to next target

Actuality, Music

10:19:50:04

Mid of ABU BAKRI motioning for producer to cross sniper alley

Actuality TEXT

ABU BAKRI:

“Your turn next. Ready?”

10:20:00:07

Mid of ABU BAKRI walking through hole in apartment walls

Actuality, Music

10:20:09:10

Mid of ABU BAKRI going through holes

NARR:

To get to the frontline avoiding snipers,

10:20:14:01

Wide of empty room, moving into corridor

NARR:

They make their way through empty apartment buildings.

10:20:19:16

Mid of ABU BAKRI cocking gun and climbing into hole

Actuality, Music

10:20:33:18

Mid from behind of ABU BAKRI emerging from hole

Actuality TEXT:

Fighter:

“Secure the way…

…and you secure the Jihad”

10:20:42:00

Wide of fighters near frontline

Actuality, Music

10:20:48:01

Low angle CU of fighter at frontline

Actuality, Music

 

10:20:51:23

CU of fighter looking through hole in wall

NARR:

Government forces are just 70 meters away

10:20:54:18

Smoking building as seen through hole in wall

NARR:

behind the burning building.

 

The tank sits just around the corner.

10:21:01:08

ABU BAKRI INTW in street

ABU BAKRI INTW TEXT:

“Currently, we control this line

We’re trying to advance further to recapture the parts”

10:21:07:08

Wide of fighter aiming to shoot around corner

ABU BAKRI INTW TEXT:

“of Salahuddin we lost”

10:21:10:16

Wide of fighter shooting gun, pan to near fighters aiming guns

Actuality

10:21:25:09

ABU BAKRI INTW

ABU BAKRI INTW TEXT:

“If we stay optimistic and work hard…

…we’ll progress, not them

Losing isn’t an option for us, they will lose

We’ve got to regain the areas we lost, God willing”

10:21:40:04

Mid of fighter peering through barriers

NARR:

But once again, the lack of proper training amongst the rebels is exposed

 

10:21:45:01

Wide of fighters shooting around tin walls

NARR:

as one of their men loses control of his heavy machine gun, almost hitting own people.

10:21:57:22

Wide of fighters yelling at rogue gun fighter

Actuality TEXT:

Fighter:

“Look what he did! He fired over here!”

10:22:07:04

CU on fighter aiming gun

Music, Actuality

10:22:12:06

Wide of burning building as seen through hole

Actuality, Music

10:22:15:00

Wide of fighters walking in rubble

NARR:

They’re immensely brave, but bravery alone doesn’t win wars.

10:22:19:06

Wide of ABU BAKRI loading gun and preparing to take a shot

Actuality TEXT

Fighter:

“Check how many bullets we have in it”

10:22:34:22

Wide of Aleppo, citadel just seen

NARR:

Bashar Al-Assad’s forces aren’t winning this war either.

 

10:22:39:04

Mid of fighters stomping on poster of Bashar al-Assad

NARR:

In recent weeks its propaganda machine spoke of the liberation of Aleppo.

 

But on the streets,

 

 

10:22:46:16

Mid of ABU MUHAMMED and several fighters in discussion in road

NARR:

that’s far from the case.

Abu Muhammed is convinced that Assad’s soldiers fight with no conviction.

10:22:56:15

ABU MUHAMMED INTW

ABU MUHAMMED INTW TEXT:

“They’re scared. They have no morale…

…and are being forced to fight

They don’t desert because they’re afraid of the regime”

10:23:05:09

CU of a crowd of men outside a bus

NARR:

They’re not the only ones who are frightened.

10:23:09:15

Mid of interior of bus, two fighters and their prisoner in white shirt, seated

NARR:

The rebels have a prisoner.

 

 

10:23:14:16

CU of man in white shirt seated near bus window

NARR:

The man in the white shirt had mistaken Abu Mohammed for a government army officer and offered to provide information on rebel positions in return for money.

10:23:24:22

CU of man in white shirt seated near bus window

Actuality TEXT:

Interviewer:

“What’s your name?”

10:23:26:16

ABU MUHAMMED INTW outside bus

ABU MUHAMMED INTW TEXT:

“We tricked him to find out about his plan

As you just saw…

… he said that he would supply security positions…

To defeat the ‘armed gangs’”

10:23:37:20

CU of fighters pushing man in white shirt off bus and towards building

Actuality

10:23:49:22

Mid of fighters pushing man in white shirt towards building

ABU MUHAMMED INTW TEXT:

“Once the regime falls we’ll give him a fair trial”

10:23:45:23

Mid of fighters pushing man in white shirt towards building

Actuality TEXT:

Fighter:

“This is the dog of Assad”

“Assad’s dog…”

10:23:57:07

Mid of fighters pushing man in white shirt towards building

NARR:

The situation was now out of Abu Muhammed’s control as the young rebels took matters into their own hands.

10:24:04:17

Mid of fighters pushing man in white shirt towards building, drag man inside

Actuality TEXT:

“Don’t let anyone in”

10:24:06:17

Wide of ABU MUHAMMED talking and gesturing to fighters before walking up the street

NARR:

For over two hours, the man was tortured behind closed doors.

10:24:16:02

Wide top shot of Aleppo, damage evident

NARR:

It’s a dirty war on both sides,

10:24:20:06

Wide of man walking in rubble, Aleppo behind him

NARR:

vigilante justice on the one hand and the indiscriminate bombing and

10:24:25:03

Wide of plane flying over buildings

NARR:

killing of thousands of civilians on the other

10:24:27:13

Wide of alley filled with rubble from destroyed building, soldier walks through

Actuality

10:24:37:20

Wide of soldier walking up to bombed, collapsed house in alley

NARR:

Under this house lies a  family of seven, killed in an air raid.

10:24:50:00

Wide of fighter pointing to rubble of house

Actuality TEXT

Fighter:

“The people want freedom? This is the price of Syrian freedom

10:24:53:21

CU on fighter in front of rubble

Actuality TEXT:

Fighter:

“Bashar Al-Assad is an occupier

Bashar Al-Assad is no president”

10:24:57:20

Wide of rubble in front of building

Actuality TEXT:

Fighter:

“Bashar Al-Assad is a terrorist”

 

10:25:01:20

Mid on corpse of Imam on ground

NARR:

This cleric has lain in the same position for four days.

 

10:25:05:00

Wide of Imam’s corpse on ground

NARR:

The rebels are certain that the sniper who killed him is using his body as bait.

10:25:12:19

Wide of Imam’s corpse on ground

Actuality TEXT

Fighter (off-camera)

“You guys drag him. We’ll cover you”

10:25:13:19

Mid of fighters edging closer to corpse

Actuality TEXT

Fighter:

“Wait.

The sniper is shooting from that side”

10:25:18:14

Mid of building just above corpse

Actuality, Music

10:25:25:15

Mid of fighters preparing to reach body

Actuality, Music

10:25:36:22

Mid of fighters preparing to reach body

Actuality TEXT

Fighter:

“The sniper is over there”

10:25:41:05

Wide of fighters throwing rope lasso around corpse

NARR:

According to Islamic custom, it’s essential he be buried as soon as possible.

10:25:50:14

Wide of fighter trying to retrieve body

Actuality TEXT

Fighter:

“Cover, cover”

 

10:25:55:15

CU of fighter dragging corpse by its foot

NARR:

The stench of decay under the hot sun is almost unbearable.

10:26:01:02

Wide of fighters carrying now wrapped corpse to car

Actuality TEXT:

Fighter:

“Put him here. Bring the car

Get the vehicle”

10:26:10:17

Wide of fighters in adjacent street

Actuality

10:26:13:02

Wide of fighters around body

Actuality TEXT:

Fighter:

“Aircraft, Aircraft”

10:26:22:15

Wide of fighter jet in sky

Actuality, music

10:26:27:01

Wide tracking shot of road ahead from top of car

Actuality, music

10:26:34:01

Wide of fighter breaking down stone wall

Actuality, Music

10:26:38:11

Wide of ABU MUHAMMED and fighters climbing into window

NARR:

The fight continues, street by street, block by block.

 

Abu Mohammed still believes in victory, but his mood darkens

 

10:26:48:21

Low CU behind fighters walking through apartment

NARR:

when he hears that one of his friends has been killed.

10:26:52:22

Darkened apartment hallway

ABU MUHAMMED INTW TEXT

“Today as we have seen…

… we advanced against the army

10:26:56:16

ABU MUHAMMED INTW

ABU MUHAMMED INTW TEXT:

“My friend became a martyr.

He was not just a friend.

In this uprising, people you’ve known for only a few days…

… it feels as though you’ve known them a lifetime.

So if they die, it hurts deeply”

10:27:34:07

Wide of AA truck backing up

NARR:

In this reflective mood, he voices another fear, that few ever talk about on the frontline. That after Assad is defeated

10:26:51:19

Wide of two fighters cautiously going round street corner

NARR:

Islamic extremists may attempt to hijack the revolution.

10:27:41:14

ABU MUHAMMED INTW

ABU MUHAMMED INTW TEXT:

“If they try to impose themselves on others

This will create another revolution, another war”

10:27:51:09

Wide of Aleppo at sunset, Citadel in distance

ABU MUHAMMED INTW TEXT:

“The revolutionaries will fight them as we have fought the regime”

END

                                   

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